I can hear wood creaking as he shifts, meaning he’s sitting on the porch swing at his parent’s house
I love this image, cause I love porch swings! I hope there is one at Jared's folks' house!
All I’d wanted after this long, rough summer was to spend a long, rough week alone with Jared in bed.
There was something about his voice, subdued and serious, that had me changing my mind. I’d heard it too often this summer and if it would make Jared happy that I’d meet him in Wisconsin, then I’d do it. Anything to see the smile that had been gone for months.
I once again cursed both our budding movie careers for keeping us halfway across the country from each other this summer, especially when Jared needed me the most – breaking off his engagement to Sandy, then having to face thousands of fans right afterwards and tell them about it.
Awwww, poor Jared!
I like how you explained the split with Sandy.
Jared had grown almost uncommunicative since everything happened, barely managing one or two word answers when I called, when he even took my calls.
He had loved Sandy for a long time and letting go was painful, plus the hate being directed at him was pulling Jared into a dark, depressive place and away from me.
Poor Jensen! He wants his puppy and he's getting Pod!Jared.
just a random cricket to break the stillness
"When you wish upon a star . . ."
the uncomfortable silence that fills the spaces
I like that phrase. I can really feel this, and Jensen's apprehension. No talking at the airport, no talking in the car, you set the mood really well.
Not asleep, but wanting me to think he is. . . . I lay only inches from him, but tonight I feel we’re miles apart.
No talking in bed, no touching in bed, I wondered what Jared was gonna say when he finally did start talking! If I didn't know who wrote it I'd be starting to wonder if Jared wanted to break up too! (but I knew you'd NEVER have them break-up at Jenny Lake ; ) )
Good description of the house and the lake.
I spy Jared standing outside on the deck, his back to me totally naked.
Oh no wait, I was just projecting, there, sorry!
“Missed you,”
FINALLY!
His whole family puts peanut butter and syrup on them.
OMG, dude! My family does that too! With corn syrup, though, not maple. I like mine traditionally, but once in a while I'll get a craving for peanut buttered pancakes.
I’d thought things were improving after breakfast
Damn, me too!
The image of them lying on the dock in just swim trunks, holding hands with the sunshine pouring over them is just beautiful!
“I’m sorry,”
I LOVE that Jared's first words aren't about what he's been going through, but an apology for what Jensen's been going through!
And I love that he knows EXACTLY what Jensen was thinking!
“But I don’t want easier, Jen. I want YOU. I want to put all this crap behind us. I’m done with what other people think or say.”
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Date: 2008-09-16 07:13 pm (UTC)And that's a beautiful manip!
I can hear wood creaking as he shifts, meaning he’s sitting on the porch swing at his parent’s house
I love this image, cause I love porch swings! I hope there is one at Jared's folks' house!
All I’d wanted after this long, rough summer was to spend a long, rough week alone with Jared in bed.
There was something about his voice, subdued and serious, that had me changing my mind. I’d heard it too often this summer and if it would make Jared happy that I’d meet him in Wisconsin, then I’d do it. Anything to see the smile that had been gone for months.
I once again cursed both our budding movie careers for keeping us halfway across the country from each other this summer, especially when Jared needed me the most – breaking off his engagement to Sandy, then having to face thousands of fans right afterwards and tell them about it.
Awwww, poor Jared!
I like how you explained the split with Sandy.
Jared had grown almost uncommunicative since everything happened, barely managing one or two word answers when I called, when he even took my calls.
He had loved Sandy for a long time and letting go was painful, plus the hate being directed at him was pulling Jared into a dark, depressive place and away from me.
Poor Jensen! He wants his puppy and he's getting Pod!Jared.
just a random cricket to break the stillness
"When you wish upon a star . . ."
the uncomfortable silence that fills the spaces
I like that phrase. I can really feel this, and Jensen's apprehension. No talking at the airport, no talking in the car, you set the mood really well.
Not asleep, but wanting me to think he is. . . . I lay only inches from him, but tonight I feel we’re miles apart.
No talking in bed, no touching in bed, I wondered what Jared was gonna say when he finally did start talking! If I didn't know who wrote it I'd be starting to wonder if Jared wanted to break up too! (but I knew you'd NEVER have them break-up at Jenny Lake ; ) )
Good description of the house and the lake.
I spy Jared standing outside on the deck, his back to me totally naked.
Oh no wait, I was just projecting, there, sorry!
“Missed you,”
FINALLY!
His whole family puts peanut butter and syrup on them.
OMG, dude! My family does that too! With corn syrup, though, not maple. I like mine traditionally, but once in a while I'll get a craving for peanut buttered pancakes.
I’d thought things were improving after breakfast
Damn, me too!
The image of them lying on the dock in just swim trunks, holding hands with the sunshine pouring over them is just beautiful!
“I’m sorry,”
I LOVE that Jared's first words aren't about what he's been going through, but an apology for what Jensen's been going through!
And I love that he knows EXACTLY what Jensen was thinking!
“But I don’t want easier, Jen. I want YOU. I want to put all this crap behind us. I’m done with what other people think or say.”
YAAAAAY!