Bosco was my favorite character on Third Watch. I loved he and Faith.
A woman after my own heart. =)
You know though, I almost offered you a quick grammar correction in the fic, but decided to skip it. But now you've given me a fresh opportunity. ;-)
The above should be "I loved him and Faith" or "Faith and him". A lot of people make the mistake of using "he", but all you have to do to figure out which is correct is ask yourself "How would I say it if I didn't include the second person?" You wouldn't say "I loved he", you'd say "I loved him", so it remains "him" even when you add in Faith.
[I would have mentioned this after reading the last chapter of the fic, but then I realized you had one case where the "he" was correct, and I wasn't sure how I'd explain the difference to you.]
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branchandroot
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Date: 2007-10-25 02:32 pm (UTC)A woman after my own heart. =)
You know though, I almost offered you a quick grammar correction in the fic, but decided to skip it. But now you've given me a fresh opportunity. ;-)
The above should be "I loved him and Faith" or "Faith and him". A lot of people make the mistake of using "he", but all you have to do to figure out which is correct is ask yourself "How would I say it if I didn't include the second person?" You wouldn't say "I loved he", you'd say "I loved him", so it remains "him" even when you add in Faith.
[I would have mentioned this after reading the last chapter of the fic, but then I realized you had one case where the "he" was correct, and I wasn't sure how I'd explain the difference to you.]