http://moonlit-violets.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] moonlit-violets.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] agt_spooky 2008-09-17 03:02 pm (UTC)

The word beautiful has been used numerous times already to describe this story, but I'm going to used it again because this tale truly is beautiful in all ways.

I adore the fact that you wrote it in the first person. You don't see that very often in this fandom and it's one of my favorite ways to write. When you connect with a character so well that you can hear their voice in your head, see from their POV with your own eyes, it always comes through in the writing. You really connected with Jensen and it added amazing depth to both characters.

I also love the way you worded the sex scenes, the atmosphere you created, because it brought home the fact that they weren't just getting off, they were making love.

Stellar fic!

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