Jen´s depression, sadness and numbness really get to me and he convinces me as a character stuck in life because of his loss. Drinking way too much as a way to cope.
Jared though doesn´t have much of a persona yet to me apart from him being kind, gentle and caring.
I´d like to know more about his character traits, who he is as a person.
What I also love about your writing is that I feel being into the story from the very first moment, feel being emotionally hooked.
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Jen´s depression, sadness and numbness really get to me and he convinces me as a character stuck in life because of his loss. Drinking way too much as a way to cope.
Jared though doesn´t have much of a persona yet to me apart from him being kind, gentle and caring.
I´d like to know more about his character traits, who he is as a person.
What I also love about your writing is that I feel being into the story from the very first moment, feel being emotionally hooked.
Looking forward to the next installment!!